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Emotional suicide
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2006
We're killing ourselves a kiss at a time
Drunk and caught in a moment
Your hands on me
Your life inside of me
Killing ourselves every night
No wonder there is so much emotional suicide
So many cold people walking empty
If all passion dies this sweetly
"So many cold people walking empty
If all passion dies this sweetly"
That is a great way to end a poem. i keep trying to read through the rest of it, to make it all connect but i definately like those two lines the best.
but i don't like the "no wonder there is so much emotional suicide" it's long and throws off the rest of the poem. although the emotional suicide thing is a really good idea,just not great execution.would be great with a revisment.
Nicole.J.Burgesss
Very nice.....sad but nice.
Killing ourselves a kiss at a time...good line. Very sad stuff :(