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A simple fuck can fuck a lot up
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2006
If a simple fuck breeds many, then I'll never fuck you again
Because all the fucked up things, hurtful words and fights
That have aroused form this equation equal total disaster
And fucked if I know what we should do, and fucked if I even care
Fuck you and fuck me and fuck all the things we do to each other
Fuck the fact that you like me and the fact that I want you too
Fuck all the worlds from here over
I don't give a shit anymore
You could fuck a dirty whore for all I care
So long as you stop fucking with me
The fuckin poem rocks the fucking flea bitten world with its fucking raw flat out fuck filled face to the concrete, fuckless feeling... so ABSOLUTELY fucking flung out and spat out of your screaming fucking pen or, fuck , I mean flung out the fuck loaded fleshy tips of your fucksoaked fingertips....*whew.. I gotta catch my breath*
Ok so the condensed version of this fucking fucktastic critique could be summed in one short word/phrase.... "FUCK"....lol
you do tend to use that word fairly often. I like the poem lol, it is not bad at all
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
only when dealing with chris poems
ash
Much Love
Ashley