Temtation
hard like rain
falling in my soul
Aberration
thick as mud
my life out of control
Compentation
rich like lye
bruning in my mind
Isolation
clear as day
blind loving the blind
Sensation
sweet like honey
just to hear you know
Hesitation
sharp as glass
how much can I let go
Frustration
rugged like rock
who I am every day
Temptation
red as fire
a single car away
This was a really cool way to go about a poem, with every third line acting like a title it was as if you had half a dozen poems in the one, and you did it without interrupting the rythm of the piece too. But what does Entorpy mean? >_>