The differences of us

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2003

I said all you've ever wanted to hear

And all you could do was listen

I spent the night awake and unnerved

You spent the night dreaming sweetly



I did all you've waited for

And you did all I feared

I spent this day nearly dying

You spent this day with her



I finally said what you've always know

And you showed me what I've always seen

So I'll spend my life less burdened

But you'll spend your life unclean


Author's Notes/Comments: 

the title is soo good the poem is soo bad

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BRENDEN
thoguth that would be blunt to you but meh


Much Love

Ashley

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This poem is soooo old, and i only realized now that i missed it. Sorry, im not really sure who this is for, me or someone else, considering when it was put on here, either way, it seems well done, the second stanza especially.Good job

nikki


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