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Unforgiven answers like footsteps in the past

I don't know what I wanted, but I wanted it to last

unreconized memories like shadows of the sun

I can't say what went wrong, but I wasn't the only one

who went unheard, unloved, unwanted

I'm not the only soul that's now haunted

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"instead of holding you I was holding out, I should have let you in but I let you down, you were the first to give I was the first to ask now I'm in second place to get a second chance" Faber drive

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©8 November 2007 - 7:58am — running_with_rabbits
18 February 2009 - 8:37pm — Nicole.J.Burgess
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I love this one, it's short but any longer might have ruined it. and it wasn't wordy or anything, it was just really good, Horray!!!

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