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Pretending to be you pretending to be me
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2002 Go with him
But not today
Run ahead
He's in your way
Play his games
But make him lose
Find his loves
Then make him chose
Hurt his soul
But don't show yours
Make him work
You're worth the chores
It's all so dumb
This thing called love
I bet it's a joke
In the worlds above
I can't do this
Why can't you see
I�m pretending to be you
Pretending to be me
don't get lost in the illusion of love
for love is no joke
but its' illusion is quite humorous
and painful - " let us go within
in search of love, there we'll find God"
Much Respect, One Love
Yeah, the second last stanza should be chopped out, but I think the last one actually fits very well - it kind of helps put the rest of the poem into perspective. Excellent poem overall.
Reuben
Actually it's not bad, I kinda liked it, very true.
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss