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Go with him

But not today

Run ahead

He's in your way



Play his games

But make him lose

Find his loves

Then make him chose



Hurt his soul

But don't show yours

Make him work

You're worth the chores



It's all so dumb

This thing called love

I bet it's a joke

In the worlds above



I can't do this

Why can't you see

I�m pretending to be you

Pretending to be me

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Why do I always run away?

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©9 July 2002 - 8:30am — running_with_rabbits
21 December 2002 - 9:48am — ultimprv
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don't get lost in the illusion of love
for love is no joke
but its' illusion is quite humorous
and painful - " let us go within
in search of love, there we'll find God"

Much Respect, One Love

11 July 2002 - 3:56pm — turonah
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Yeah, the second last stanza should be chopped out, but I think the last one actually fits very well - it kind of helps put the rest of the poem into perspective. Excellent poem overall.

Reuben

11 July 2002 - 12:08am — Nicole.J.Burgess
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Actually it's not bad, I kinda liked it, very true.
nikki

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