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I never knew
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2002
I didn't know what to tell you
So I told you what you heard
Now everybody talks to you
And I don't say a word
I didn't know what to give you
So I gave you my life
Now everybody takes from you
And I still get the strife
I didn't know how to forgive you
So I just let you try
Now everybody has a friend in you
And I've found no ally
I didn't know what to show you
So I just showed you love
Now everybody holds you
And I watch them push and shove
I didn't know how to handle you
So I just let you go
Now everybody smiles for you
And I uphold my woe
I use to think I knew
What I was fighting for
And now everybody knows
I don't think that anymore
This is probably one of the better ones that you have written and by far one of my favorites, so good job although I could hav sworn that I had already critiqued this one so yeah
lol
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
I totaly like the way you rhyme. its nice to find a fellow
rhymer. other than that trust me if i had names i would
kick a few asses. and that aside i found it effective how
you kept the same format throughout the peom.seems hoekey
but its late and i could find anything i didn't like.
(probably tells you something) (( other than those ass
wholes))