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Come live in me
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2002
Enter my soul
Find yourself there
See all my wounds
Feel how I care
Enter my mind
Hear your own thoughts
Get lost in a world
Of unravelling plots
Enter my heart
Feel your own touch
See what it does
But don't see too much
Enter my person
See a person like you
Both battered and broken
But still shinny and new
Enter my world
Stay for a night
Love comes and goes
So enjoy the invite
Wow!
That was really great! It was insightful but so refreshing! Good job. I don't think there's anything about it that I would change! *Awesome!*
Wow ash; this one's really good
i like the whole idea that you're inviting them in, but only for a while
the poem definitely ends well; the last two lines are the best of the poem (but that's just IMHO)
keep up the great work :-)
Wow ash,
this could be taken in so many ways.
But being as I have a really dirty mind
ya know what I be thinking!
Naughty,Naughty!
Without me to (sob)
Nah, Good poem, nice flow, for once no complaints here.
Love Nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss