The boy who lied

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2001

once there was this boy who always lied

he told one to his mum and died

but no one cared

coz he never shared

so not one at his death bed cried

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school :(

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Vicki D's picture

umm...meaning? eheh those that lie die?? no..those that don't share don't get cried for at funuarals?? hmm..heheh love ya always Vicki (do it, do it, do it) heheheh yes it is still on da radio!

Nicole.'s picture

I like it, It's not your normal poery type though. Luv Nici.

Miranda Rae's picture

Ashley, This poem reminded me of something my parents always taught me and my sister. They didn't care what naughty or bad things we did as long as we owned up to them. The lie told to cover up the bad deed was worse than the deed itself in their eyes. Great poem!