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My Eternal Torment

I wake to find I can no longer see.

The last thing I had was a sharp length of silver.

Covering my eyes though all is black I hear a shot... screaming... sobbing.

What was going on?

I try to cover my ears so I can't hear their pain,

But I can't move.

I force the sounds out of my head,

Only to smell, and taste blood.

Blood? Why blood?

I try to hold my breath and spit out the blood I taste.

I am not breathing. I will never breathe again.

I have to sleep with the sounds the sights and the smells and tastes.

This is my eternal torment.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I really have nothing to say about this I wanted something, but I never would take it, now I am glad I didn't.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 2:22am
©5 December 2006 - 6:17am — Asheron
30 January 2007 - 10:44pm — Trista Calderara (not verified)
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intersting....

6 December 2006 - 5:47pm — Fawn Maddox (not verified)
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I know how you feel on this one bro.

5 December 2006 - 10:32pm — Dracona_Dragonfly
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kittie i am so glad that you desided not to kittie! i dont know what i'd do without you! i love you so much! but i dont like you writeing like this! i dont like you thinking like this! but it is better than you doing what you would have if you didnt write! kittie i love you! please dont ever forget that!