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at the Doors of Perception,
Jim Morrison's sins died for you,
were crisp for you,
crackled at dawn for you,
confronted times vibrant pace
and were forgotten,

by you

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i love it when i experience the crispness of a crackling dawn.

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last updated 30 October 2010 - 12:03am
©26 May 2003 - 5:51pm — arindhol
12 July 2003 - 5:30pm — Kaz Pink (not verified)
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Brilliant! Heh, I'm only 18, but damn I can fully appreciate a concept of Jim Morrison. Great work!

1 October 2003 - 3:56am — Stewart Alexander (not verified)
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That was beautiful...

"confronted times vibrant pace"

Cracking line !!