13 July 2003 - 12:42am — Hollie Laurin (not verified)
amazing, i feel it. well.. actually i feel forgotten... is that what the poem was supposed to do? induce a feeling of forgottenness? i liked it.. a lot. i dont like the ending though.. it drops off to nowhere.. you just end it.. is there more to this?
awesome poem liked it alot !
amazing, i feel it. well.. actually i feel forgotten... is that what the poem was supposed to do? induce a feeling of forgottenness? i liked it.. a lot. i dont like the ending though.. it drops off to nowhere.. you just end it.. is there more to this?
maybe that's why, what?