Do you hear that it’s the sound of goodbye should I talk or should I cry?
Love you hate you live or die?
My heart is telling me what to do my heart is telling me I still love you.
So now you tell me what do I do?
Do you feel the pain down deep do u see me when I weep?
Do you watch me when I sleep?
Can you feel the tears that fall and can you answer when I call?
Can you catch me when I fall?
I will do anything but crawl.
But you wont do anything at all
So let goodbye be my final
call
your poem is so pretty! its really sad though... it has a lot of meaning in it and it also describes how i feel sometimes! i love it! Good job! lol
xoxo ~*AnnA*~
OMG this is exactly what I'm going through right now! It describes my situation perfectly.
Good job, keep it up.
Peace and Love.
~Robin~
Hello.
I believe this one really got to the point. I kinda liked it, the reasone why i say kinda is because it is sad.
I felt that way once. You can tell if you've read my poems.
well i g2g now. keep up the good work.
J.P.R. II
This has a very deep meaning. Good going!