Final Call

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Do you hear that it’s the sound of goodbye should I talk or should I cry?

Love you hate you live or die?

My heart is telling me what to do my heart is telling me I still love you.

So now you tell me what do I do?

Do you feel the pain down deep do u see me when I weep?

Do you watch me when I sleep?

Can you feel the tears that fall and can you answer when I call?

Can you catch me when I fall?

I will do anything but crawl.

But you wont do anything at all

So let goodbye be my final

call

Author's Notes/Comments: 

12/05/02

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Anna Bui's picture

your poem is so pretty! its really sad though... it has a lot of meaning in it and it also describes how i feel sometimes! i love it! Good job! lol
xoxo ~*AnnA*~

starlite_angel's picture

OMG this is exactly what I'm going through right now! It describes my situation perfectly.
Good job, keep it up.
Peace and Love.
~Robin~

Superdadx0100's picture

Hello.
I believe this one really got to the point. I kinda liked it, the reasone why i say kinda is because it is sad.
I felt that way once. You can tell if you've read my poems.
well i g2g now. keep up the good work.

J.P.R. II

Judie's picture

This has a very deep meaning. Good going!