Seconds pass as if they where hours..
Will she understand the greater good?
The right thing….
How can she understand.
When you can’t?
We all have to pay for the things
We do..
It is only fair..
But not in her eyes.
Chakram ready
Sword in hand. for this
Is the last
Battle plan.
You cant change things
Just make them right.
As your sword hit’s the ground
This shall be your
Final fight…
good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?