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Hanging Out

When he had asked me what I was doing

I told him that I was just hanging out

He said that for this, there would be no undoing

And I reminded him that I chose this route.

I said that it would be easy for me to cope

With this because I've always been a loner

Then my parents found me hanging from a rope

And God said our conversation was over.

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I was writing a story (obviously not a very happy one) but when I couldn't find a way to strengthen the story, I summarized it into this poem. No concerns about me, but if the content concerns the creators of this site, feel free to remove it.

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©9 December 2014 - 3:13pm — aRandomJoe
24 April 2015 - 5:28pm — Carcass
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Sad subject but I like the

Sad subject but I like the relevence.  "Just hanging out" and suicide by hanging.  I may have an odd sense of humor.  I doubt anyone will remove this because of contents.  If that's the case I'd probably have my account banned.  Keep up the good writing man.

24 April 2015 - 5:32pm — aRandomJoe
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I agree it's a bit messed up,

I agree it's a bit messed up, but thanks, I'm happy you enjoyed it.