We would kiss in freckled shadows
as eyes watched the fluxing Irish
sun Goddess Aine - dissolve her warmth
into an unseen world. The camouflaged
yard was full of flowering Dogwoods,
and bordering rows of arborvitae; you
could smell clover and I, for one
irreplaceable moment, unforgettable
fragrance from a single red rose.
Your treasurable yielding lips soft
as petals from a Calla Lily, shimmering
with peach gloss reminding me
of dewdrops; moisture inundating
the twinkling fires of daylight holding
us for hours before we finally escaped;
clasped snug in teen cuddles as arms
wrapped like pretzels, and tongues
sipped from our chalice of innocence.
You trembled, quaking willful into
drowning hugs and I felt you would
die to save me, surrendering every
shy insecurity without a single
compromise of your own virginity -
that you told me was reserved for him
who merited all your love. You needed
coaxing and a bit of persuasion, shunning
all but my kisses, wink, and embrace.
My mind revolved like a windmill into
designs of discovery, bated breath, and
child astonishment. Hands rocked in fear,
guilt ridden, after skating intentionally
to touch your breasts. Stop you said, and I
pled guilty with the same self-reproach
as a pubescent boy who reaches down
to fondle his own intimacy, caressing
himself and discerns … this feels good.
The mundane versus the
The mundane versus the romantic notions accompanying masturbartory musings? Odly compelling! I couldn't say how, but some how it works! :) cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I wish to express my
I wish to express my gratitude for the smooth, silver-tongue comments. I do appreciate whenever you find time to critique on a poem. Thanks. :-)
Ill be honest I adore this,
Ill be honest I adore this, it captures a beautiful time in my life, and so close to my own adventure I wonder if you could be that teenager! That lastline in particular, so true, only they still think to this day it was totally worth it ;) lol
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I wonder if you could be
I wonder if you could be that teenager? I WISH! … then again …
"We are never further from what we wish than when we believe that we have what we wished for."
Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe