the view upon the hilltop

I go to the top of a high hill,

To clear thoughts in my head...

I look onto the beauty before me.

I can see as afar as the eye can see...

However all I see is thee!

My heart, my soul,

Things I can't control!

The thought of you gives me pleasure,

The thought of us has no measure!

I wish I was with you winter's past!

Perhaps time would go by too fast!

All I know is my feelings for you,

Sadly, our time is over...

Is this true?




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you dont know me, i'm talia's friend. so anyhow its one of those nights where your in the mood to read other people's thoughts so anyhow i was going through your poetry and i decided that i liked this one best. then again i've always been drawn to nature and its peacefulness. chain of events... if i had been a lazy friend and never bothered to check out talia's site then i wouldnt have gotten ur link an read this poem (*wink) arent you the lucky one :)