(NOTICE: Poem has undergone revision after critique posted)
The saints and aints war till an end
unendingly so bloody,
that anyone would be hard-pressed
to guess who will burn below.
From the vineyards of evolution,
we aints are fed with sense and reason.
Because we think for ourselves
and say that we are gods,
the saints come down upon us
--pummeling with their parchment pumice.
The saints press our brains,
fermenting our remains
to make an incomparable vintage.
Into vile chalices
We are poured, to be consumed
at their unholy communion.
For each aint they terminate,
the saints collect more golden stars
to glitter their report cards,
hoping to catch I AM'S eye
for a better grade.
The Saints stone every god
that never left his tomb
--Allah, Buddha and Ganesa;
they stone their followers, too.
Like the dinosaurs before
--if ignorance persists,
both saints and aints will be extinct.
Can or will we unify?
There is little hope, I think.
That said, we aints submit our farewells
from the trees to which we were nailed,
as we descend into the inferno:
That place which we will share
with the saints.
(revised 08/14/09. Original composed in 2005)
Interesting poem, this one. I see you write a lot about death and the like, just like me. It's nice to see a fellow writer of the theme yet with quite a different style.
They stone every god
-that never left his tomb-
Allah, Buddha, Vishnu,
-they stone their followers, too-
"Wait! Let's lift our grails!
Let victory liquor our heads!
All praise the tainted koolaid!"
I love those two stanza, especially the first one. Is the title inspired by Marilyn Manson's S-(AINT)?
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No, it's not.