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Sunrise

Hidden deep within the night;

Murmuring soft to stay the cold,

You raise a plea to the sky--

For with the Sun you've placed your soul



Ever near; your torment's end;

Ever near; torment again...



And by your prayer the light succeeds

To breach the folds of darkened cloaks

Which buried deep our memories

With frozen chains and silent strokes...

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I wrote this during the night, and "Sunset" during the day...

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©21 July 2004 - 4:31pm — animus
2 August 2005 - 9:19pm — poetvg
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beautiful work

29 July 2004 - 2:19am — Jillian Camtasia Carver (not verified)
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Hey Dale,
I like this .. "Ever near; your torment's end;
Ever near; torment again..." I love that ... its so.. true ...

26 July 2004 - 3:24am — bluestar
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very good. sunrise... always a good thing