Why must innocence
Bring out your evil
Why did I sense
Your wicked will?
The facade is bent
The illusion cracking
The curtain is rent
Your goodness lacking.
I WISH I WERE LYING!
That is was spiteful jest
My heart was blind
My sense potent
The facts were compelling
I could not shut my eyes
Your actions were telling
I could've cried.
The thought I loved you
I'm grateful but I knew better
How could I love what I hate?
The lust in your eyes
Your eagerness to dominate
They had not a thought
NOT A THOUGHT
The clues came together
Interlocking vertabrae
Instantly in my mind
The next day.
Does it really have to be this way?
I always wondered
Why I hated you
My heart didn't want
To understand
Why do you make me hate you?
Detest you, defy you
Desecrate you?
Now I know why
I can't stand for you to touch me.
I skimmed through a few of
I skimmed through a few of your works. I liked this one the best of what I saw. Interesting flow excellent rhyme! The rhyming seemed natural and not too forced. It was a great write and I think I understand it. Good work!
Thank you!
Thank you!
Hmmm...the depth of this
Hmmm...the depth of this leaves such a lingering feeling...
Very well written and the message is loud and clear.
~Soul
Thank you.
Thank you.
Rant On
This one goes under the "Rant Poem" columnj. Good one! ~a~
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