You and me,2 people,many differences

I have a soul
Your personality is as dark as coal
I am hardworking
You can't comprehend the word 'overworking'
I'm a kind of person to be sympathetic
You will never be empathetic
I'm trustworthy and I'll listen to reason
You are more likely to commit treason
I am loyal to the end
You can't even keep a friend
I'm described as interesting and not one for hating
You're described as one who can't remember who they're dating
I'm the one you despise
And you're the one who is secretly the devil in disguise
Now I know that I'm treading on thin ice
But you're vicious and now you have to pay the price
Now let me tell you,I know I'm not God's best creation
But I'm an asset to this nation
There are a lot of differences between you and me
I'm certain you will agree
I will rise and you will fall
You will have nothing and I'll have it all

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a.griffiths57's picture

    I liked your poetry, very

 

 

I liked your poetry, very emotional this one but clear. Loved the last line, I hope I have it all as well.


 

 

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nightlight1220's picture

The heart of a hateful person

The heart of a hateful person attempts to project onto others what they deep down, feel about the world and themselves. Loved how clearly you brought that out. Some of the best combinations are two opposites ....if they both have heart and brain...;-)

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

CGrainger's picture

So much emotion, I really

So much emotion, I really liked it x