All of my life there has been a deformity
Never to be able to do something- anything
Without others watching me
It scared me to know that they realized it
I hid myself from the world
Not wanting to experience it
I tried to go to college but that didn’t work either
It just made me sick
So instead I walked in the parks and went to the zoo
I felt peace and comfort when I’m alone
Just me myself and I
Thinking about my high school crush
He was nice and popular
He called me “Blue Roses”
I think it fits me because I’m awkward like “Blue Roses”
Well I can see him again
We have so much in common
I can’t remember the last time I had a conversation with someone
To think about it I haven’t because I’ve been so shy
We kissed and I felt comfort
Something that I’ve only felt around my glass menagerie
But now not only is it the glass but him to
Before the lovely evening ended
He told me that he was with someone else
Feeling horrible inside that I opened up to him
I wanted to be sad and upset all at once
I let this deformity take over me
How could I let this take over my life?
I could have had the guy I liked
If only I would of tried
Only if I would of tried
But now it’s too late
And I’m back alone
With a mother who wants me to marry
And a brother who wants to leave forever
I don’t mind anymore
I’ll just stay here
With my glass menagerie
As usual !! Madam Blue Rose was a victim of her circumstances
As usual !! Madam Blue Rose was a victim of her circumstances.Very nicely portrayed . At the end really felt sad for Dear Blue Rose.
©bishu
Thank you
Yes she was which is sometimes what we do and don't realize it until its too late to do anything about it. Thank you for your comment on this poem.
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Wow...you make it sound so
Wow...you make it sound so different as if the person went and ran on a deserted island. That is one strong individual. They may be better off alone to rule over the world..lmao.
Nicely written!
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Thank You
Lol thank you I;m glad you enjoyed it and gave me another perspective of the meaning so thank you.
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You're welcome. You are an
You're welcome. You are an awesome writer for your age.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Thank you that means a lot to
Thank you that means a lot to me
♥Angel of Darkness ♥
Blue Roses:
How sad that the character in the poem did not get their man. I think your poem is well written and I enjoyed reading the poem.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you
Thank you so much for your feed back and i'm glad you enjoyed it
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