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Stabbing pain
Words with sharp edges
Stabbed into my soul
Tears and blood dripped
A hole where screams were silent
Spirit jumped off the bridge
Drowned in the river
Lungs filled with water
Dark blue waters
Clouds covered the sun
Light is no more
Only darkness
In my stabbed heart
Words with sharp edges Stabbed into my soul............ these are very affective wordss and i think it is to say that someone has said some hurtful words to some one, am i right? Tears and blood dripped A hole where screams were silent........ you are using some great comparisons, very good Spirit jumped off the bridge Drowned in the river....... sounds a great way of explaining how some one is feeling, like there soul has left there body to drown Lungs filled with water Dark blue waters...... this makes me think that your lungs being filled with water is the pain being unbearable and you cant breath.. Clouds covered the sun Light is no more........... this makes me think that the pain is the cloud the their life, Only darkness In my stabbed heart..... and this brings the whole poem to a point. well done Toni
a poem of interesting imagery, that jumps out at the reader...Wowwowo.... I like the opening lines, Smilesz... thanxs for sharing~!