I felt your presence
But it was bitter like ice
Your words suddenly faded into nothing
I guess loyalty has its price
I’m tired of giving my all
For something you won’t offer
Your camaraderie is what I speak of
A scrap that makes me feel so small
Give and take is the way
But when you seize
There is no return
In self-indulgence you shall smolder
hmmm like it very much... inspiring a lot...it's very sweet and professionally done this poem with deep idea... yeah I am not wrong if I again say it that you are good poet with new subjects to express... sharing it if you will also like my expression of love based peace thoughts also( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq ) I am sure my this famous say will be satisfying your every worry about the humanity and social life and even friendship...yeah is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..good friend...go on and on...