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You Can Be My Ghost
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useless You can be my ghost
And whisper in my ear
And tell me nothing but sweetness
And it will sound like angel kisses
You can be my ghost
And caress my skin
And make it smooth like angels
And it will feel like i am loved
You can be my ghost
And hold me while i cry
And rock me back and forth
And it will feel like i am flying.
Great! I've read several of your pieces (including "writing in a style that I hate") and admired them all, including the aforementioned. This poem here is just wonderful...a sweet ode to one's adoration...something quite often done by others, but so often pulled off with the elegance that you have done it with. Very nice.
I would love if you were to read and critique some of my work...check them out if you have the time...
(just don't read "mathematical metaphors in overdrive"!)
Mine, too!