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It's never over, despite what you think...
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Hmm..I wonder...? I'd kill you if I knew your name
You pretend with me, you're never the same
If you did it once, you'll do it again
Still faking those memories, emotions, and pain.
There is no pride in my heart for you
Just as worthless, through and through
If you said it once, we know that it's true
A sick fat brute with a size 14 shoe.
You forget I'm a dreamer with my head in the clouds
You forget of the times I screamed it out loud
Caught in the moment, hell's fiery clouds
Never in this moment, have you felt so proud.
You'll make it to November, nothing in your hands
You'll sigh as you remember you've lost all your fans
Still nowhere will guide you, without solid plans
They all will divide you, don't know where you stand.
Remember the whisper, sounds like the girl
You made her love you, sick in this world
Into the oceans, your plan was unhurled
Falling forever, remember this girl.
Remember the heartache, the pleasure, the pain
Remember the memories, she holds you again
Remember the caress, the kisses, no shame
Remember forever, alone with your pain.
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"Remember the heartache, the pleasure, the pain
Remember the memories, she holds you again
Remember the caress, the kisses, no shame
Remember forever, alone with your pain."
We've all been there, or will be. Intense. Emotional. Beautiful.
It's good, I like the flow it works well, any how, good luck and I hope things get better. it doesn't always end with pain, but it does seem more prominent. keep writting.
I'll have to read it again a couple of times, coz I'm not enirely sure what it is about, but I like it. it speaks to me. The rhyme seems different than usually. I'm eager to understand it... Your biggest fan! ***-Jean