Dating is a question, an if, a, what about?
And if I harbored your pain
I would not use it to burden the beauty of grass.
To be forgotten lilke the casteles kids build on the beach
Where they battle the waves like an indispensable soldier,
Always leaning a bald shoulder into the crash.
If I learned your childhood I would not erase it
With flippant remarks
Or better memories overlapped,
Or pale china I demanded you fill with your equally delicate fingers.
If I sang of your uterus
I promise you
I don't bore rough edges on the pillow
Where I will tell you what I think of the days we've lived separately,
The places we've been, the universe, and God.
There is room for you here as well,
And a life that sprawls out for decades like an open field.
A place for sprinting horses and open air,
And relaxing, and convalescing, and service.
It's as empty as a nether region and not unlike those approaching
waves
Now that you have made your acquaintance.
A new palace to defend.
An exhilarating effort.
If I drove you I would slowly.
I would tinker faithfully.
And if I sold you it would be at your behest.
You are not utterly foreign.
Your body fits like a puzzle piece in a picture of flowers
Like so many others, but I water you differently
Because of you, brilliant and as bright
As the dying of winter, the birth
Of spring, like a recently carved out poem.
You are not bought or sold.
You are not hired.
You are not lonely now.
Nestle your sins into a box.
I don't need them
And even so, I understand.
Let you become we. Let we become us.
Let a memory eclipse the winter months
Year after year, until we've built something new.
For if I was an eagle, a bald eagle, I'd sing an allegiance to you
Now that you've come, an open soul,
Typically dressed and missing just one thing.
If it's me I admit I'm missing it, too.
Now that you've read my poem
Now that you've read my poem please review it. Thanks.
this was a fun read, I love
this was a fun read, I love how creative you are in putting your words together <3
Matthew 7:14
The Narrow Gate
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Quick question. What does that 3 thing mean? I see it all the time and I've never found out what it stands for.
<3 means
HEART
Matthew 7:14
The Narrow Gate
I learned on post poems
:D smile. ;D a wink and a smile. I created ~(:D)- 'Fro
Your writing reminds me of the 60's and Beardsley.
Thanks
Thanks. I've never read Beardsly. I guess I should check him out. Was he a beat? I listen to a lot more rock and roll than I do read poetry so I tend to write song lyrics more than real poetry. Thank you for the review. It seems to me that the people on this site are very supportive of one another. I just joined this site, and I like it so far. Although it seems like most of the poets aren't really writing poetry as much as prose. Take care, and best of luck.