under the stately oak
a hermit stands, lantern held aloft.
he sees the same tree
but with a stranger's eyes.
tie a knot from willow wythes
walk clockwise with the sunrise
burn poseys or write in ancient dyes
nothing bestows the power
to see through another's eyes.
the maiden swan of mourning
ambles through the garden gate
sadness will not stop
her dancing in the sand.
by oceans, deserts, or languid lakes
in forest fires and earthquakes
whether darkness or dawn breaks
in the places god forsakes
it's her own fate that she makes.
i have seen a tree
with roots in the sand
and roots in the sea.
stranger paths have crossed.
the hermit and the maiden swan
together or alone and gone
battles lost and battles won
it matters not what has been done
if it leads to being one.
Wherever Your Head Was
when you wrote this poem is a place worhy revisiting - marvelous song. I saw Swan Lake and this took me there. Sand dancing is phenomenal poetry. Only an artist who paints in oils can see so much more than mere mortals - enjoyed 4th time. ~allets ~:D
Awww thanks!!!
Maybe I should paint this
nice pictures, I see them
nice pictures, I see them plainly
My Secret River
thanks :)
I'm a very visual person so imagery is easy. Incorporating the other senses is a challenge
Love folk tales especially as
Love folk tales especially as lyrical and wonderfully wise as this :) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
aww thanks ssmoothie!!!!
hugs back :)
I Love it
It is beautiful
KS
So much
:)
thanks!!
3rd Verse
Grabs the heart and twists - wrenched by sand dancing - nice images for feeling - Enjoyed 3x - :D
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aww thanks!!
i like that verse too. and the one about the tree. i really saw that tree. my writing did not do it justice. imagine a tree growing on the seashore, surviving salt water shifting sand and bashing waves. how did it get there? how did it live that long? how did it continue to thrive in a place so difficult and dangerous? i wish everyone could see that tree. it was astonishing.
I wish you had a photograph
I wish you had a photograph of that tree. Because I'd certainly like to see it.
i went by it pretty fast
in a boat in the ocean. generally that's a bad place for any electronics. that may be another painting in the future.