When she

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When she


by a Man From Maine



and when she smiles

I feel warmth in my heart

 

and when her eyes glisten

I melt and succumb

 

and when she speaks

I hear no other sound

 

and when she frowns

I search to cure

 

and when she shows concern

I carry as though my burden

 

and when she speaks of life

I understand a meaning

 

and when she were to sin

I will pay with my being

 

and when she fails

I will teach she has not

 

and when she loves

 I know heaven on our Earth



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J-C4113D's picture

I have been reading poetry

I have been reading poetry for forty-five and a half years, and this is one of the most beautiful love poems I have read in all that time.


J-Called

aManFromMaine's picture

Thank you

Thank you for your kind words. Truly the one that would understand what I wrote is the subject of my affection. But I'm glad you liked it.

 

Frank

Jesster's picture

pretty

This is nice. It makes me smile. 


Copyright © JessterStarshine

Daniel-59's picture

the warmth of woman is a

the warmth of woman is a stark contrast to the winter of life
the brilliant sounds of her voice ring bright as the sun
just beyond the dark prison doors
remembering the sweet taste of lips
found in the dark of the night

welcome to my madness

~ D D ~


I liked Your's better but I've never been it a happy place..lol


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

aManFromMaine's picture

I liked it --- you can expand

I liked it --- you can expand on this one I'm sure---you seem to be a poetry machine---

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

and when she frowns I search

and when she frowns I search to cure...really like this!! Keep writing


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

aManFromMaine's picture

Thank you very much!

Thank you very much!

sweetwater's picture

I love the way you jump

I love the way you jump straight into this as if half way through without an actual beginning. Very unusual. Lovely wording too. Sue.

AziVsH's picture

I Like This

This is beautiful. 

aManFromMaine's picture

Thank you very much

Thank you very much

allets's picture

"...heaven on our Earth..."

a nice reworking of a cliche - I love it when that happens - The repetition makes it rhythmic, like a song lyric. (& yes, beautiful) ~(:D)   Star

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