LIKE DYING

The fire flickers

Burning out



The years will pass

I'll still be here



The glass stands half empty



My heart beats its last

The sparkle in my eyes expires



You never let me fly

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Jason Daffron's picture

Hey! i like this! i Love how it is simple...yet complex at the same time...the transition in this poem is amazing for such short length. i mean you wrote it perfect..it's like you are on the edge of letting go..and then you are gone and the last line is awesome...really good job! ~Jason