14 February 2007 - 3:26am — Jason Daffron (not verified)
Hey! i like this! i Love how it is simple...yet complex at the same time...the transition in this poem is amazing for such short length. i mean you wrote it perfect..it's like you are on the edge of letting go..and then you are gone and the last line is awesome...really good job! ~Jason
Hey! i like this! i Love how it is simple...yet complex at the same time...the transition in this poem is amazing for such short length. i mean you wrote it perfect..it's like you are on the edge of letting go..and then you are gone and the last line is awesome...really good job! ~Jason