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If two
people
once lovers
part
as friends
they should
at least
visit
one another
sometimes.
Do you not think?
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Lady A

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©28 November 2014 - 6:12pm — allets
18 December 2014 - 11:37pm — SSmoothie
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its so effective in its

its so effective in its simplicity and gravity at the same time the king of shrewdness Master Beavis would be hard pressed to better it! incredible work this piece. I really connect with it too. much love and respect SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

20 December 2014 - 2:28am — allets
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Just To Be Mentioned . . .

in the same paragraph with THE MASTER is an honor, SS. All hail to the king, I bow offering respect to you both.- glad you found a thread to connect from your artistic bent to this poem - it is one of my favorites because it is unanswerable. - Lady A
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9 December 2014 - 11:35pm — Daniel-59
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I Don't Know ? l As the one

I Don't Know ? l

As the one that was left behind in the search for greener pastures 

I still have mixed emotions  
On one hand in My mind I've killed her a million times Choking her with my bare hands.
Truth be told I still love Her and would kill for Her still today.
I sit in the Shadows along with our Boy's watching over Her even now .
As long as She's ok ( secretly hoping shes not to happy) I live alone with My mutt and call it good ? 

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

18 December 2014 - 11:41pm — SSmoothie
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you too? Twisted bro?  i

you too? Twisted bro?  i replaced my mutt for a family still feel the urge to choke em but its better, far better than festering alone :D! Im sending you a hot nurse with lots of love and positivity, not too young, not too courgar, just right! Well, I know that when you get out occassionally you visit there and I figure someone to look after you would be great. then again maybe a bedfellow? some sweet lovely enchantress with a kidney problem or something... you can share survival stories! ;) hugss ps the addage is true. Any love will do! 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

18 December 2014 - 2:16pm — allets
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Older Poem

I was thinking of a friend x-love and kinda was mourning the loss because of all the great times and joys. We try to recapture what's lost, have to relegate it to the past and yes, I agree, calling it good works for me. I wish him well and not too much happiness. When I heard about his second divorce, I smiled a little. - Lady A
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