I Got Old

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Growing 

old was

easy.

Wearing

trousers

rolled

is a

problem.

.

Lady A

06-04-22

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1SP's picture

This little piece hits with

This little piece hits with that perfect, understated honesty—the kind that says more in a breath than most say in a page. “Growing old was easy” feels like a whole lifetime distilled, and then the twist lands: it’s not the years, it’s the details that get you. That Prufrock echo in the rolled trousers gives the poem a sly literary grin, but underneath it is something tender—an acceptance of aging that’s neither bitter nor sentimental, just real.

 

What I love is how you let humor and truth sit side by side. It’s a reminder that aging isn’t one grand revelation; it’s a collection of small negotiations with the body, the mirror, the wardrobe, the world. And you capture that with such lightness that the weight sneaks up on you after the read.

 

A sharp, clever, quietly human piece.

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Thank you

I always enjoy reading you.

Teytonon's picture

Hi

I wouldn't worry too much about your trousers.

As long as you can walk on the beach you'll be fine.

And eat a peach, if you dare.

allets's picture

Good Point

Love me some peaches and pears! Thanks for the read and very nice comment.

~A~
 


 

 

redbrick's picture

Rolled trousers would drive

Rolled trousers would drive me mad. I would take a good pair of fabric scissors and cut them to length, if need be. But that's just me. Thanks for sharing.


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allets's picture

Good One

Cut off the prob. Very good asvice. Like editing :D

~A~


 

 

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And it was one of Prufrock's

And it was one of Prufrock's several problems.  Eliot really piled them on to J Alfred.


Starward-Led (in Chrismation, Januarius)

 

allets's picture

True

1 of them was length. :)

~A~