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Love In The Shadows
Through my darkness and sorrow
I can see your smiling face
holding me aground
I can hear your voice whispering to
don't let go, hold on and be strong
today is not your day nor is tomorrow
your future is waiting full of happiness and joy
so weep for me no more
for I will always be beside you
Standing firmly as your shadow
to walk through all of time hand in hand with you.
As i read your poem it really
As i read your poem it really touched home.
it drew tears and a smile at the sametime.
Really nice...
Thank you, words are strong
Thank you, words are strong yet beautiful :)
For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination,
No words to say how nice this
No words to say how nice this is. Simple and has an aire of sweet innocence about it.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Just lovely! well done! :)
Just lovely! well done! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Standing Firmly
as your shadow - nice line, wrong tense for stood (past tense). Great syntax, wonderful rhythm of the phrasing. The telling is clean and the description marvellous. Enjoyable read this ~A~
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Thank you for taking time to
Thank you for taking time to read my poem and thank you for the comment, i didnt notice the tense change myself so really thank you for that! :)
For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination,