At the end

 

 

Finally

There it is

 

After all

 

The struggling

The groping

The climbing

 

Through the darkness

 

Here it is

However faint

 

A glimmer

 

Indicating the way out

 

The only thing marring

My relief

 

Is that damned whistling

 

Growing louder by the second

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patriciajj's picture

Enigmatic and intriguing,

Enigmatic and intriguing, this has certainly piqued my interest. The structure and movement is captivating while the emotion is palpable. A brilliant creation. Bravo! 

Stephen's picture

Excellent!

This poem could describe the experience of having Covid 19.  However, it is so wonderfully written that it describes a number of other experiences including dying.  Great write.  ---   Stephen

adriannemerideth's picture

Thanks for your input. Not

Thanks for your input. Not being the gadabout that Emily Dickinson was, I appreciate it.


Adrianne