I like this poem. It captures in just a few lines the insomniacs curse "each night barely living" and yet, because in this case the insomnia is by choice, the last line conveys that the insomniacs-by-choice make the conscious decision to stay awake. An interesting poem!
I love short poems... thanks very much for your opinion! You know... I originally was drawing out of my life: 1) I'm not an insomniac but 2) my lifestyle is sometimes like theirs... I wrote it as a respectful, but sarcastic remark about myself and fellow night owls.
Kudos!
Kudos!
thanks Beavis
thanks Beavis
Cheers,
Adam_San
Short and to the point
I like this poem. It captures in just a few lines the insomniacs curse "each night barely living" and yet, because in this case the insomnia is by choice, the last line conveys that the insomniacs-by-choice make the conscious decision to stay awake. An interesting poem!
Check out my poetry book - as I write it! http://lostincyberspacepoems.blogspot.com
I love short poems... thanks
I love short poems... thanks very much for your opinion! You know... I originally was drawing out of my life: 1) I'm not an insomniac but 2) my lifestyle is sometimes like theirs... I wrote it as a respectful, but sarcastic remark about myself and fellow night owls.
Cheers,
Adam_San
Night owl here :-)
I think I liked it also because I am a night owl. There is something very peaceful and relaxing about the night :-)
Check out my poetry book - as I write it! http://lostincyberspacepoems.blogspot.com
We always pay for it in the
We always pay for it in the morning, though, don't we 0_o @lifeofthecollegestudent
Cheers,
Adam_San