To The Insomniacs-By-Choice

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Here's to the insomniacs-by-choice,
to spend each day striving
and each night barely living;
If only, that we had better sense.

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Beavis's picture

Kudos!

Kudos!

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thanks Beavis

thanks Beavis


Cheers,
Adam_San

missmfa's picture

Short and to the point

I like this poem. It captures in just a few lines the insomniacs curse "each night barely living" and yet, because in this case the insomnia is by choice, the last line conveys that the insomniacs-by-choice make the conscious decision to stay awake. An interesting poem!


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I love short poems... thanks

I love short poems... thanks very much for your opinion! You know... I originally was drawing out of my life: 1) I'm not an insomniac but 2) my lifestyle is sometimes like theirs... I wrote it as a respectful, but sarcastic remark about myself and fellow night owls.


Cheers,
Adam_San

missmfa's picture

Night owl here :-)

I think I liked it also because I am a night owl. There is something very peaceful and relaxing about the night :-)


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We always pay for it in the

We always pay for it in the morning, though, don't we 0_o @lifeofthecollegestudent


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Adam_San