The horizon is dark in this lonely world
My life my thoughts all in a whirl
I want to end this living
I keep trying and trying and giving and giving
That blade looks like it could be my friend
And bring this all to an end
Its all falling around me
Its all foggy and dark i see
Try and try as i might
My mind and body are begining to take flight
Falling Falling
I hear people calling
They say dont go
But im in a situation no one knows
Its all getting worse
Verse by verse curse by curse
I try to clear it up with sleep
But yet in my dreams my problems keep
It all could be so easy to finalize
But it would be my "friends" i would penalize
For now im stuck in this cell
Living my life out in family hell
okay so i decided to read some of your poems and i think this one is like one of my favorites, i think everyone can relate to this at least once in their life....well at least i could! but yea i def. like it.
Jessi
I like this one! Its good and I can relate to it in a way...