Transcending to the eternity,
path made wet by tears.
Mastering on detachment!
Never know until you experience
how it bleeds your heart.
Its not child’s play!
Till yesterday it was a part of you
Today it’s away,
and tomorrow it’s not yours…
It is not child’s play!
Chant Om! Aloud…
Let it ring the walls of world
It’s the cry of the child…
And child you know that
Its not child’s play!
this is a good poem...
Intersting poem! I'm not sure as to the specific theme, but the emotional one is there! I love it, awesome work!
As to "Love's Reality," that poem is more of an emotional revelation about something that's really personal. I think I was trying to put my emotions on paper and wasn't really consentrating on the story of the poem. Suffice to say, it's a result of what the mind is telling you, and what the heart wants.
I do so agree with what you said though, about how people are constantly confussing love and attraction. I don't date anymore, and one reason is because of the fact right there. People my age are CONSTANTLY getting those two ideals mixed up and sometimes it makes me want to reach over and slap someone for it LOL :)
Thanks for the comments! :)