im still breathing underwater
how pointless
i look up and see the waves
or your face
or-
pull me up
hold my face between your hands
you said stop looking back
my eyes were on you?
it doesnt fucking work like that
you try breathing underwater
Bravo!
No, it doesn't work, your face above water and you offer neither a hand nor a boat. Looking back? Maybe an old friend is behind me, offering a boost. - Your write says chose better paths up and on any way forward. Well said and well sculpted.
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