i saw you in circles

stretched around the bottom line 

a boundary you weighted more and more, until, i laid down flat, looked up, and couldnt see the stars


in circles 

pull me to the top again

you sink your hands into the hurt you made


in circles

turn toward the new sun 

torn into.

eyes up and i couldnt look away


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  • "turn toward the new sun
  • torn into." This line is quite fine and "in circles" repeated rips at something.
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  • ~S~




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powerful write

So much wondrous tensity! ~S~ Re-read 01/21. Each tme, some new insight. just nice, a short disrance from the eye-mind to the agony.