careless red watermarks
not even a flower was laid
cementaility spread like milk in black coffee
"creamy emptiness"
concealing the incourruptable
washed over and etched in acid
swallowed up together
seperated by marked seams
loathed like loaded dice
dirt cheap and glowing
give a name, divide... it's all the same.
It
Couldn't be described more colorfully and creative with vivid images.
Bravo! I'd love to see more soon!
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
"dirt cheap and glowing"
expensive and dull is the opposite of this image. Divisiveness, hard cut or social or personal. Anyway, it is acid etched and ate. :D
Etched
You are right about using etched. I‘m hard headed and have been far from humble. Things change.