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Forgotten Friend

I am your forgotten friend

My body old and decayed

My breath is as stale as bread

My skin shriveled and gone

I am supposed to always be on your mind

I am rotting in a casket

I am waiting for you to think of me

My last wish is to be in your thoughts

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I had to write this for class. One of my friends told me it was good and I wanted to see what other people think. Don't expect much, I'm in ninth grade. Stupid Fishies, if you know what I mean.

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©31 January 2014 - 3:40am — abbiespoetry
7 March 2014 - 3:26pm — justanotherscreename
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There will always be people

There will always be people not with us today, and sometimes life is so busy we forget. Great write.

5 March 2014 - 6:25pm — running_with_rabbits
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losing friendship is hard and

losing friendship is hard and this poem seems to put the pain out for all of us to feel and consider when ending friendship ourselves

 

thanks for the share

Much Love

Ashley

2 February 2014 - 7:39pm — Muin
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Abbie "Is" Awesome.... Great

Abbie "Is" Awesome....

Great write....

 

Blessings.

31 January 2014 - 1:34pm — a.griffiths57
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    Quite a morbid write this

 

 

Quite a morbid write this poem, a good recital for the scarmongering season of Haloween, I think. Your poem is well written and is very descriptive creating scary images.

 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

31 January 2014 - 4:59am — nightlight1220
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Rotted, old, decayed... and

Rotted, old, decayed... and still wanting. Wow Abbie. That's so halloweenish. Love it!!

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "