a speck of surreptitiousness sinks
wandering
without a point of a view
it matters little
the speculation shrinks
what is old will be new
while rainbows become a riddle
stretching there sublimely
in casual delicate traces
consciousness is dispersed whispering
acting in the spaces
selections darken on the face of shadow women
colorless and abandoned they thrust down inevitably
and their charms surround in full display
in between the night and the day
Such lovely poetry here;
Such lovely poetry here; your word usage and rhyming - so abstract and simultaeniously so clear. This poem made images float through my mind as I found your work here so imaginative and creative. Beautifull and a very good read.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Fascinating Respected Mr 9inety.Also loved the cursive format
Fascinating Respected Mr 9inety.Also loved the cursive format.You are a truly accomplished.I spread my wings to fly high but end up tangled in a branchy tree:(
©bishu
A Delicate Touch
Willowy and soft breeze blown lines - enjoyed 3 x - Just Bein' Stella