dying desires imitating flames
in a cold sighing decree from long ago
ebbing embers glow to ashes,
yet ever so slow
here with mirages from the merciless
that stagger me so
since you chose to lay me low,
now I am far below
your dubious hands,
choke my words in this compliant game
quickly grasping my throat,
never lost in their claim
your warped words
would douse any of the lingering sparks
as I sat and cried
at all of your flagrant and sweeping remarks
fold me in half rip me down
until you stole my writing instrument
false kisses from soft lips
never missed the mark of your true intent
I kneel watching as my white shadow quivers
as if our little rapture shriveled into shivers
you may have it as you please
you shall pierce as you tease
the slaughtering from your probing eyes
desperate are my weary replies’
my naked heart is vertical from above
it barely hovers
you sent me deep in secret places,
my restless lover,
my exhausted role hides behind the barest cover
forever was too late while the future never recovers
in this torment of love where sheer aloneness replaces
now, the hollow in my soul descends into darker spaces
there you will find me with my madness
in the dominions of lonely abandonment and sadness
this wounded heart has withered my eloquence
you have buried my love with all its remnants
when you see that my skies are falling through
are you pleased with all that was ravaged by you?
slowly, passing into the mournful abyss where I start to sink
unable to appease
but, until then
take a measure of your pleasure, and do as you please,
as I lay after exhuming, and I ask you,
shall I die again?
That moment when you realize
That moment when you realize another has managed to capture the storm that a weary soul has felt and you instantly feel as connection between the words you so love and the reality of your own soul. You have a skill that so few exhibit so fluently and an ability that tends get lost in translation. It's a pleasure to get lost in and relate to your command of the art.
thank you
I am truly moved by your comment and humbly so...
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Trees leaves flowers birds do not waste space Dear Mr Dylan
Trees leaves flowers birds do not waste space Dear Mr Dylan
©bishu
Thank you
Mr. B.
you r a prince amonst men!
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot