a subway is as good a place as any to fall in love
the “A” train I think
I remember playing on my blues harp and how the notes echoed
off of those tiled walls
the scenery beats the hell out of my worn out heels
worn from the pounding out the beat
yeah, the beat like I was playing for the “Duke of Ellington”
the attitude of been there, done that
progressing as I played the progression
it was a long time ago
now, evolving as I write the words,
it brings me to the matter at hand
it is winter here in my backyard a rolling Arctic express
keeps a continuous flow of snow clouds above my head
the cold cumulonimbus
some glassy darting eyes on a cloud
for in some still corner of my eye
within the peripheral of short blinking lights
such a short time
and I have not played for the gathered crowd in quite awhile
the more exotic lick there lips for another taste
for want of lessons that will make something feel better
I shiver
weeping in the cold wind,
hearing nothing underground
until I long for that transformation into morning
while the waiting has a certain nature
for acquiring the hue of some different blues
fantastic
fantastic
Your command of word
Your command of word usage was put to good work here in this poem. Brilliant narrative throughout the poem taking the reader with you on journey of day at the underground subway. Creative descriptive quality is pretty good. I enjoyed your poem very much.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
This was so calming and
This was so calming and peaceful to read. Thank you 9inety, dear sir!! ♡♥♡
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "