some different blues

 

 

 

a subway is as good a place as any to fall in love

 

the “A” train I think

 

I remember playing on my blues harp and how the notes echoed

 

off of those tiled walls

 

the scenery beats the hell out of my worn out heels

 

worn from the pounding out the beat

 

yeah, the beat like I was playing for the “Duke of Ellington”

 

the attitude of been there, done that

 

progressing as I played the progression

 

it was a long time ago

 

 

 

now, evolving as I write the words,

 

it brings me to the matter at hand

 

it is winter here in my backyard a rolling Arctic express

 

keeps a continuous flow of snow clouds above my head

 

the cold cumulonimbus

 

some glassy darting eyes on a cloud
for in some still corner of my eye

 

within the peripheral of short blinking lights

 

such a short time

 

and I have not played for the gathered crowd in quite awhile

 


the more exotic lick there lips for another taste

 

for want of lessons that will make something feel better

I shiver

weeping in the cold wind,
hearing nothing underground
until I long for that transformation into morning

 

while the waiting has a certain nature

 

for acquiring the hue of some different blues

 

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AyeshaKFaines's picture

fantastic

fantastic

a.griffiths57's picture

    Your command of word

 

 

Your command of word usage was put to good work here in this poem. Brilliant narrative throughout the poem taking the reader with you on journey of day at the underground subway. Creative descriptive quality is pretty good. I enjoyed your poem very much.


 

 

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nightlight1220's picture

This was so calming and

This was so calming and peaceful to read. Thank you 9inety, dear sir!! ♡♥♡

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "