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the edge
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Hyacinth garden
toward night’s design
dense with promising deception
upon the edge
a labyrinth
of risk
with needs
a prelude
to pursuit
hushed pledge
eludes
lips
eclipsed
before they
slide
into the surge
of surrender
ceaseless source
cadence of breath
glossy folds
flow
hot
drenched and desirous...
at last
salty slash complete
yield and reveal a refuge
in caress of soft secrets
Gorgoeus! Completely gorgeous
Gorgoeus! Completely gorgeous except for that one word which in my mind brings it to vulgarity the word slash aflyer salty... Other than that par Excellence one of your finest! Take me!!!!! ;) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Hmmm
this is a bit of a quandary, I could edit that word out but then, the poem would not be as "edgy" what to do, what to do???
any suggestions?
anyone?
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
*kneels with bowed
*kneels with bowed head*
.....
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
You never fail to surprise Sir
You never fail to surprise Sir.I oft feel your words.
©bishu
Incredible flow and wording
Incredible flow and wording this poem is superb.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
Yes very wet diamond ;)
Yes very wet diamond ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."