Venus in a mirror

at that place

where attraction

knelt to beg

 

a similar space

where distraction

humps your leg

 

                                                      as I search for

                                                            beauty
                                               there hidden by chance

 

where glow exposes from the memories

that still burn

never hotter than the fires of Hades...

 

 

                                             knowledge fills the night
                               with awareness that there are sincere lies

 

I dreamt a reality

as conversation

referred

and the words went round

the lips of Venus in a mirror

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I am copying your word placement on poem page

I am copying your word placement on poem page.I liked the way the words are placed on the page.Thanx for teaching .....You are indeed an enigma Sir Dylan.


©bishu 

 

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a reference

to the the famous painting by Titian


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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where I went

for my "in search of beauty tour" 12/2005

 

I found beauty

this I confess

but alas

without solace

 

http://www.nga.gov/content/ngaweb.html

 

the place is so amazing

Peace

Dylan

 

 


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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Smoking Line

"...never hotter than the fires of Hades..." I am wowed by this line - fab write ~allets~

roflmfao re: the distraction leg hump


 

 

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your funny

you always come up with a witty comment

I bet your a real pisser when you get your party on!

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot