at that place
where attraction
knelt to beg
a similar space
where distraction
humps your leg
as I search for
beauty
there hidden by chance
where glow exposes from the memories
that still burn
never hotter than the fires of Hades...
knowledge fills the night
with awareness that there are sincere lies
I dreamt a reality
as conversation
referred
and the words went round
the lips of Venus in a mirror
I am copying your word placement on poem page
I am copying your word placement on poem page.I liked the way the words are placed on the page.Thanx for teaching .....You are indeed an enigma Sir Dylan.
©bishu
a reference
to the the famous painting by Titian
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
where I went
for my "in search of beauty tour" 12/2005
I found beauty
this I confess
but alas
without solace
http://www.nga.gov/content/ngaweb.html
the place is so amazing
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Smoking Line
"...never hotter than the fires of Hades..." I am wowed by this line - fab write ~allets~
roflmfao re: the distraction leg hump
your funny
you always come up with a witty comment
I bet your a real pisser when you get your party on!
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot