careful cursive, described and distributed
who once knew
distress prompting lines maybe from inspiration
emptiness in her lonely travels
thoughts become a pretender to attention
voice vows low
several extinguished candles shown
symmetric smoke bravely billow up from faltering
cold is a poor patron for the passion of her heart
cross your fingers trail across the prominence of fate
night is threaded one strand at a time
monitor a feeling by an apostrophes constraint
in a prayer primed by intention it will chase scattered serenity
dreams fit between hands without preparation
lips whisper when one tries to comprise with contact
the picture sketched on canvas stretched in a frame
as her handwriting awaits still she runs off the page
She runs off the page.
Your poem is very descriptive, I have some favourite lines. What despair I felt from the poem, very good writing.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Wonderful
This peom was simply wonderlly beautiful. The care and attanetion you put into your words is very evident. I feel for this poet and thank you for this delightfully sad and moving peice.
Incredible! So sensitive,
Incredible! So sensitive, such care and thought, so beautifully wrought. Love this. It would give anyone the strength to look forward great write! Hugss
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