immerse me in similes
you know the real me, I am without metaphor
not a number one, not even a top ten
a bit damaged and lacking in abilities
there is only a mortal at this portal
like a gathering of sighs, I am illusive
in a weird world that is crazy and abusive
bury me with imagery
no reality show here, I lack description
a distant, solitary shape disappearing again
an ordinary shell as if I am in transparent skin
required by convention and the run of the mill fears
listen to me, I am talking to the vestibule of your ears
a presentation from the furtive, where nothing is clear
Explains all of us, ninety.
Explains all of us, ninety. Awesome. I like this>>I am illusive
in a weird world that is crazy and abusive
Man's whine since the beginning of time?? ;-)
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Wowy 9inety
Wowy 9inety. Please dont be soooo humble. Blow ur trumpet sometime at least for self esteem. Good write up.You R NOT ORDINARY
©bishu
haha the perfect example of
haha the perfect example of the opposing dimensions in writing and creating art: "Look at me
I'm all inspiring!" "Don't look at me I'm just an artist, don't judge me!" I can relate here definitely.
Dear Mortal At The Portal
You are not a # anything, you are a warlock and have magic beyond counting when weirding words with wonderous will. I enjoy reading your work. ~Allets~
thank you
means alot to me
these words coming from allets,
warlock hmmm.... I only conjure what my audience of readers will allow.
it is hard to find anytime these days,
so much going on and too much other stuff gets in the way.
I conjurer with all my might,
I want another hour or two to play.
Just for me. And the words I see...
Alas, tis not meant to be.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot