to wonder is worse
then to know
while a tongue bleeds from the bites
and ears restrained
when love is anticipated
often on restless nights
finally
to be there
not here
to be less than temporary
and unite in dreamy thought
while the North wind approximates
it is invisible energy
and I hiss at venting
like that,
release, release
breathe
mist wisps and curls
when the night moans and cries
to need the other badly
to smother the restraints of soft sighs
these oppose all other sounds
where erect visits the depth
savor the essential scope
it spreads steadily
as a name changes to wild rumors
it is the giving
it is as good as it gets
to practice that particular technique
it becomes as sweet as receiving
Very well written in my
Very well written in my opinion! Great use of literary elements to layer the poem with a much deeper meaning love it!
You are
too kind, thank you so much.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Nice to see you bring out
Nice to see you bring out your sexy side! Of course it's always a pleasure reading your work' ;) great piece!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
good gravy you're good. I
good gravy you're good. I feel I falied you in feeling the exact intended meaning, and for that I apologize. How long have you been writing?
You can never fail
@ interpretations the audience is the reason! The reason we write, whether meaning is direct or indirect that is not my intent. The intent is to entertain and to stimulate the readers to think, in some small way to stretch the boundary of their own mind's eyes. As for writing it goes back many, many years, I’ve always found poetry to be a gratifying experience along with a level of catharsis. Thanks for your commentary, enjoy.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
wise words indeed
wise words indeed