broken promise land

 

 

in the borders of broken promise land
feel the fury of fists and the back of a hand


they can’t raise the dead nor, give sight to the blind
when someone named god resigned

 

somewhere in there in the dockage of pain
all the inhabitants are a bit deranged
back-and-forth the pendulum swing
hear the sound of the dark angels hushed wing

 

the sun dial does not tick, no sun means no time
here you will hear echoes that exist taunting in all of her rhyme


what makes us so that we all despise her she is her own sympathizer
sing an unearthly song from the tempting treadle pumping synthesizer

 

evil mass out in the tousled universe exploding like melinite
obtunded reflexes in an about face on this ghostly night
one other living soul hears the shadow goddess ululation
while her envenomed tongue chants a strict oscillation

 

then she spews the viscous green necropsy zanies
in a spiced voice of rehearsed slang for all of them pushing up daisies


while uptight usurping shunners are trading insults
another neonate from the séance seeks spiritual results

Author's Notes/Comments: 

don't look into the evil eye when you go to the theatre of trance

sweet dreams kiddies

 

re-edited 7/13/14

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Dober's picture

I think this is very

I think this is very intrresting. it would be really cool if there was a peice about how to escape this "broken promised land" that is if the individual wants to leave it.

9inety's picture

that is a

great idea Dober!!! I'll try and come up with something... any ideas?

Peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

JROBI27102002's picture

wow

i think this is very good